Forward Progress on the Thirteens

Okay, here's my finished pencils for page two of The Thirteens project:

I'm really starting to learn just how challenging sequential art can be. I'm hoping by the time I get to the inking stage, I'll be much more relaxed, and able to go with the flow a bit more. As it stands, I'm fighting to get every panel to look acceptable to my perhaps slightly overblown standards. I'll fix it later!
R